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Little Girl, What Do You Fear? by ~lollicat:iconlollicat:





There she is in the small boat on the ocean.
There she goes drifting to the horizon.

She is alone with no passengers,
She is free...

The ocean smiles loving her company
There is something hidden
A mystery that he wants to explore.

"Little girl, don't you fear the horizon?
The sun will come nearer and nearer as you drift.
It will be so bright
So hot...
Little girl do you not fear the sun?"

"No I do not.
Silly ocean the sun will never burn me.
It is so far away.
My boat will not carry me to it,"

The ocean was then silenced but
He still held a fear for his dear friend.
Little girl why don't you fear the sun?

There she is in the small boat on the ocean
Drifting towards the horizon.

No longer alone
Far too many passengers...

The ocean conceals a frown
She is no longer hidden
But he doesn't lose interest.

"Little girl, do you fear the sun now?
The horizon coming ever so close,
I feel the heat on the boat. I see the worry in your eyes.
You no longer smile, little girl,"

"No I do not.
Silly ocean, my sun will never come.
Do you not see?
I fear not being free.
Look at my boat
There is no room.
Are you so blind ocean that your eyes
Cannot perceive my true age?
My true fear?"

The ocean could no longer be silenced,
"Little girl what do you fear?"

"You"
©2008-2009 ~lollicat
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Shes afraid of teh ocean?!?!?!
Ha ha i would be too lol.

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Well I suck at interpreting poetry...nevertheless, it's really great. :D

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I wanna be cremated 'cause skeletons freak me out.
I thought this was really interesting and nicely written, it seems to really flow (no pun intended--ocean). Good job. ^^
Yeah b.c if she falls out she drowns! XD

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haha yeah I usually suck at it too (when it comes to lit and interpreting stuff I fail) anyways thankies!

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Thank you! :glomp: and no worries the ocean is not offended... ^^

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she cant swim ?

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Wow, very deep!

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this can mean so many things......But I really like this! It's great! :D
Is it something like wanting to get away from her true fears, and wanting to be free? But all along she still had fear with her, but was putting up a facade.........
0_0 , That's the best I got. lol

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