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This is the World? by ~lollicat:iconlollicat:



Just when I thought the world could not get any darker...
Just when I thought that the kiss of death had pressed its full lips on us all
Just when I thought evil had consumed the earth and made it so convincingly beautiful,
We would have all fallen for it.

Just when I had lost the only thing that made me keep going
The only thing that kept me alive

I was proved wrong.

A trickle, a stream, a river, an ocean
The light flooded my eyes
I was almost blinded by the absolute joy
The absolute honesty of it all.

A trickle, a stream, a river, an ocean
I had not felt this in a long time.
This faith in humanity has come and inundated
My heart, my soul, my mind, and whole being

A trickle, a stream, a river, an ocean
It was so simple
It was so kind
Could I really explode over a quivering flame?

I saw what you did.
A candle lit by you
The world is not filled with darkness.
You proved me wrong.

Her look of gratitude,
As you handed her the book.
I saw hope in You!

This trickle, this stream, this river...
The ocean of hope lives in humanity
Just when I thought the world would end...

And I thank God everyday for simple kindness...
I thank God for this torrent of hope
This kiss of faith.
You

This world is not dark for we have
Light
©2008-2009 ~lollicat
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Kinda cheesy, but I needed something happy, plus after doing this one religion station prayer service, and watching our little puddle of candles I felt an odd sense of hope. this world ain't so bad. ^^
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oooh lol its not all tht cheesy! =D its nice, very nice. tis like =]

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Dean: You know what, there\'s a ton of lore on unicorns too. In fact, I hear that they ride on silver moonbeams, and that they shoot rainbows out of their ass!
Sam: Wait, there's no such thing as unicorns?
thanks! :boogie:

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Dean: You know what, there\'s a ton of lore on unicorns too. In fact, I hear that they ride on silver moonbeams, and that they shoot rainbows out of their ass!
Sam: Wait, there's no such thing as unicorns?
Amen to that.

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"I have seen the future. And it licks itself clean." Bucky Katt.
"It's business, babe. Don't blame me, blame our capitalist society." Bloo
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"Tell me whom you love and I will tell you who you are".
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it's not cheesy at all !! it's so beautiful and so true...
we all need this little flame of hope...
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Thank you!! and thanks for the fave!! :glomp:

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Like the others have commented before me, I see no cheesiness here. Its those little things in life that can mean so much.
Its bittersweet to know that going through all those bad times make you appreciate the few good ones that much more :nod:

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